[My comments are taken from a mailing list discussion and as such contain spoilers!]
[on the setting]
I'm about halfway through and I'm finding that Florence is coming more
alive the further I read. I like the way that I don't feel like I'm
on a sightseeing tour but that it's the accumulation of small details,
like having to do removals and street cleaning in the middle of the
night in order to avoid blocking the narrow streets, that are really
bringing the scenery to life for me.
I also like the juxtaposition of Florence with characters like the
vicar and his wife and Miss White, this kind of comparison brings out
the foreignness in the setting for me.
[on the police characters, uniforms]
Generally I got confused with which police characters were which. I
found the two British detectives the easiest to keep track of. I was
a bit bemused as to why the Marshal was ill for most of the book when
it seems that this is his series. The Marshal was the clearest of the
Italian policemen to me though. I found the Captain completely
forgettable and though I couldn't forget Bacci he didn't make a big
impression on me. I guess that there are a lot of policemen in a
relatively short book and they couldn't all be fully fleshed out.
Well, I think uniforms are a useful recognition aid to know who is
supposed to be directing the traffic or serving the customers or
whatever but I'm not a fan of their use as status symbols and wouldn't
want to wear one myself. I don't remember the big deal about Bacci's
uniform, it must hve gone over my head as I think quite a lot did in
this book, probably because of the very fragmented way I read it.
[on the non-police characters]
First of all I had reader's confusion syndrome with two many C's!
Cipolla, Cesarini and Cipriani were way too alike as names for me to
keep them straight and I spent half the book flicking back to figure
out which one was which. I think that means I didn't find the
characters well enough fleshed out.
I found the expats much simpler to keep straight than the Italians.
They seemed to be both more individual than the Italians but also more
stereotypical examples of the English abroad at the same time.
I didn't have a good picture of him as he was dead before we met him
and the fragments of his life we found out about didn't seem to
present a consistent picture. I thought it was odd that the British
police had been sent over to help out thoough merely because he was
related to someone influential. That seemed a bit odd.
I think the decision to portray the victim as a character or an object
is the author's really and the reader has to go along with it. I
think I prefer books where the victim is a character but it all
depends on the book.
Purchased on 8th February 2002.